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Losing Love

My rainbow's on fire up in the sky, The flames are emotional pain. The colours of hurt fall in a storm, Fall in a colourful rain. And her thunder sips coffee in a future of doubt, A future of quiet torment. The stallion, the bull's now a broken down dog, The grand piano just got up and went. Deep down I know my hurricane of love, Won't kiss the harp that it once knew. My bandit of love has ridden away, Leaving my rainbow a shadow of blue.

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Date: 6/6/2017 5:39:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve expressed your lost love and feelings beautifully in a poetic way however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 11/6/2016 11:15:00 PM
Enjoyed this is well penned poem on love lost Lewis!:)
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