Losing Love

My rainbow's on fire up in the sky,
The flames are emotional pain.
The colours of hurt fall in a storm,
Fall in a colourful rain.

And her thunder sips coffee in a future of doubt,
A future of quiet torment.
The stallion, the bull's now a broken down dog,
The grand piano just got up and went.

Deep down I know my hurricane of love,
Won't kiss the harp that it once knew.
My bandit of love has ridden away,
Leaving my rainbow a shadow of blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ajmal Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 5:39 AM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve expressed your lost love and feelings beautifully in a poetic way however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Hoffman Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Enjoyed this is well penned poem on love lost Lewis!:)
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