Losing Her Mother At Twelve

Growing up in a grief filled home
Where laughter would never be heard
The blinds kept drawn
For death to linger ever present



liberum divisa : excerpt from my poem THE MOTHER TO HIS DAUGHTER



AP: 2nd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Cunningham Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 4:01 PM
So sad for a child to lose her mother at such a young age, her grief will stay with her a long time until she can come to terms with it. Good luck in the contest, I hope you are well Line. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:12 PM
Thanks, Tom ~ much appreciated
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Hello Lin, losing a parent at any age is rough. Yet it is worse for a child at the age of 12.A child needs her mother. Hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 12:10 PM
Hello Lin, thank you Lin. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Darlene
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:12 PM
Absolutely, thank you, Darlene ~
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