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Losing Her Mother At Twelve

Growing up in a grief filled home Where laughter would never be heard The blinds kept drawn For death to linger ever present liberum divisa : excerpt from my poem THE MOTHER TO HIS DAUGHTER AP: 2nd place 2021 Submitted on February 20, 2021 for contest LIBERUM DIVISA 4 sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN

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Date: 2/20/2021 4:01:00 PM
So sad for a child to lose her mother at such a young age, her grief will stay with her a long time until she can come to terms with it. Good luck in the contest, I hope you are well Line. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2021 6:12:00 PM
Thanks, Tom ~ much appreciated
Date: 2/20/2021 3:03:00 PM
Hello Lin, losing a parent at any age is rough. Yet it is worse for a child at the age of 12.A child needs her mother. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/21/2021 12:10:00 PM
Hello Lin, thank you Lin. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Darlene
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2021 6:12:00 PM
Absolutely, thank you, Darlene ~

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