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Losing Heaven

When heaven's been discarded and our dreams are lost forever, then we will wail o'er our misspent fortune-- our small time in history, soon to be forgotten by twittering birds and grossly fat narcissists.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/13/2019 9:39:00 AM
Your last line is classic L.J.! Very clever indeed. Congratulations on your win! : )
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/13/2019 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Connie-- much appreciated (especially as this is the 1st comment in 5 years for this poem!!!)

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