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Loser

Stop being such a jerk Someday your parts won't work Then you'll wish you were not alone No one will ask you to their home You'll think about what you've done You're not the only one Who has people in their life No one will want to be your wife You will be so lonely Wishing that you had only Been nicer to one and all No one will give you a call No one will want you then Not maybe, if or when You will wish you had been sweet Baby, you're going to be dead meat!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/15/2014 7:19:00 PM
Ha ha!
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Mama Bear
Date: 11/15/2014 7:36:00 PM
Glad you appreciate the humour! Love Mom
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 7:22:00 PM
thanks for pointing me in the direction of the white flag poem lol:-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 11/13/2014 12:28:00 PM
There are too many of them around... nice poem!!
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Mama Bear
Date: 11/13/2014 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. Blessings. Edith
Date: 11/12/2014 4:49:00 PM
ooh his parts won't work - how tragic - get out the white flag for him mama bear! There is no excuse for rudeness mama but sometimes it just bites them on the butt and they end up sad and lonely and can't understand why but only have themselves to blame! Hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2014 7:20:00 PM
Good one Jan!
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Mama Bear
Date: 11/12/2014 5:30:00 PM
You always get where I am going!! Thanks for the visit. Hugs and blessings. Edith

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