Loser

Stop being such a jerk
Someday your parts won't work
Then you'll wish you were not alone
No one will ask you to their home

You'll think about what you've done
You're not the only one
Who has people in their life
No one will want to be your wife

You will be so lonely
Wishing that you had only
Been nicer to one and all
No one will give you a call

No one will want you then
Not maybe, if  or when
You will wish you had been sweet
Baby, you're going to be dead meat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Ha ha!
Bear Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:36 PM
Glad you appreciate the humour! Love Mom
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:22 PM
thanks for pointing me in the direction of the white flag poem lol:-) hugs jan xxx
O'Leary Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 12:28 PM
There are too many of them around... nice poem!!
Bear Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Thanks for the visit. Blessings. Edith
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 4:49 PM
ooh his parts won't work - how tragic - get out the white flag for him mama bear! There is no excuse for rudeness mama but sometimes it just bites them on the butt and they end up sad and lonely and can't understand why but only have themselves to blame! Hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Good one Jan!
Bear Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:30 PM
You always get where I am going!! Thanks for the visit. Hugs and blessings. Edith
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