Loser

Caught up in a world
of dreams and false hope
looking for a cure
that can't be found
fighting with a demon
that's not even there
a life with no future
struggles to find its way
as the real world caves in 
the dreams fade away
a life with no purpose
sees no reason to go on
yet it lives any way
and tries to move on
a world with out this life
would not change one bit
the feeling of being useless
will not let it be
a soul lost
can not be free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 1, 2010 at 11:36 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Justin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 6:47 PM
A wonderful write. I like it
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April 30, 2010 at 4:34 PM
impressive i love your loser poem. my kinda write and read,..p.d.
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