Lose Control

I sometimes lose control
of everything I do
or want to do
and when I lose control
I can't help myself
I get excited
and I will keep going
and won't stop
I lose control
when I get excited
nobody can stop me
I am just out of it
in another world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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February 1, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Dear Mindy, This "in another world" - is that your own one, per the previous poem I commented on ? This poem is a pretty powerful ststement. Love Alan
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