Loretta Part 2

We went away heaps of times, to busso, gerro, freo, york, bunbury and albany
I remember most the latter and how you wrecked my bike so horribly

I carried it up a hill, while you went to get the ute
But after awhile I decided to cycle the damned route

We found a little restaurant called HK's
Not sure it will be so cheap nowadays


We went to see the natural bridge and the gap
It was so scary it made us crap


We've been to bussleton quite a few times too
You learnt how to dive, and I was so proud of you

Every moment with you I cherish in my heart
I never thought we would ever part.

Our love was beautiful and so strong
Things went bad when you parents came along

When they vanished once again
You found your love hard to sustain

Babe, I love your smile and your laugh
You gave me a time and a half

I love the way you smell
makes me think we came from the same cell.

Stand by me when the days are dark
Soon we will be able to reignite that spark.

My plans for you were always sincere
I got lost somewhere tying to make it clear

Hey babe, you were my true love
You fitted my slipper like a glove


But time was always my enermy
It ran out and  so did my tenacy

I worked real hard on my legal case and house
Preparing for our future like a mouse


I worked so hard to make it real for you
But on the journey you threw me your shoe

Oh babe, I wish I could turn back the clock
But the bloody thing just goes tick tock

I will never love again
memories of you will ensure it is never quite the same

I know no-one is really to blame
But I wish I could deal with the pain

You will find someone whom you like
I just hope you don't go for a dyke

oh my darling darling girl
why can't you give it one more whirl?


love george (you will always be in my heart)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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