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Loretta Part 1

Hey Loretta, here's a poem just for you written by an admirer who's feelin quite blue We met at Oggies on a sunny winters day Just around the corner from your place, I'd say We hopped around from table to table following the sun We drank hot chocolate and coffee by the ton When I came to your house for dinner, I got lost cause all teh roads in ellenbrook, seemed to criss-cross I drank all the wine as I searched for your place Little did I know I was so far yet so near from base. We sat on the couch and I asked you for a kiss when it happened I knew that this was bliss You loved my kiss so very much Nothing ordinary, nothing common touch It lingered in your mind and memory It was sweet wet and very sensory We went out the next week to Rosie O'Grady's Kissed all night, it must have looked a bit shady The day after when I saw you in my shorts All I wanted to do was for us to court. As the days went by I fell more and more in love And soon you were all I would think of. We first went away to a beach house in two Rocks We went to the beach and got sand in my jocks we walked along the beach at leasure looking around for any shipwreck and treasure

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