Lord?

Cut me apart
Don't look again
Forget my heart
We couldn't have been

You're a liar
You loved me yesterday
I'm left in a mire
I'll still love you always

God wouldn't give you love
If there wasn't a reason
He's always watching from above
Throughout every season

But does love not count
Lord please let me know
I will not sit and pout
But oh, I love him so...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 12:12 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Jen. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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August 27, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Dare I say; when it comes to love, the Lord may use it against you. It's His secret weapon. And if you think cutting yourself hurts, wait till you get cut with a double edge sword. I wouldn't even tell God I have a girlfriend. The swim into my emotions are just too deep.
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August 27, 2009 at 4:15 PM
Very passionate. Keep writing. Sara
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