Loose Thoughts In My Head

We can’t stand this chaos, we need an organized society
Heartless humor
Haven’t we been saying that since the 90s’, only where is the organization?
 
The country will change, and things will get better
Such open denial 
Can’t someone see the country is changing, only things are getting worse
 
We need God in this country, don’t we?
What an ask
With all the praying and churches, isn’t God here yet?
 
If only these leaders will have the fear of God, perhaps things will be better
Hear, hear
Not with all the loose money and dirty lies making the rounds on the corridors of power
 
Electric power is off again for the umpteenth time, and these thoughts are flying loose upstairs
Irony of darkness
You probably have the same thoughts, but like me would continue to hope things get better

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/24/2020 12:55:00 PM
If everyone knew this, we would be positivelychanging our countries everyday.. great and thoughtful piece.
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 6/24/2020 3:04:00 PM
True that. So true...
Date: 6/23/2020 4:57:00 AM
We need God in this country, don’t we? What an ask With all the praying and churches, isn’t God here yet?...impressive and thoughtful asking; great expression......
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 6/24/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Mahtab!
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