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Loose thoughts in my head

We can’t stand this chaos, we need an organized society Heartless humor Haven’t we been saying that since the 90s’, only where is the organization? The country will change, and things will get better Such open denial Can’t someone see the country is changing, only things are getting worse We need God in this country, don’t we? What an ask With all the praying and churches, isn’t God here yet? If only these leaders will have the fear of God, perhaps things will be better Hear, hear Not with all the loose money and dirty lies making the rounds on the corridors of power Electric power is off again for the umpteenth time, and these thoughts are flying loose upstairs Irony of darkness You probably have the same thoughts, but like me would continue to hope things get better

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Date: 6/24/2020 12:55:00 PM
If everyone knew this, we would be positivelychanging our countries everyday.. great and thoughtful piece.
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 6/24/2020 3:04:00 PM
True that. So true...
Date: 6/23/2020 4:57:00 AM
We need God in this country, don’t we? What an ask With all the praying and churches, isn’t God here yet?...impressive and thoughtful asking; great expression......
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Adeshina Aladeshawe
Date: 6/24/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Mahtab!