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Loose Me Asap

Gardening in a dress
Figured it would be nice and breezy
A red wasp had his way with my back side easy

One little wasp caused alot of mess
Ten stings/bites caused me alot of ouchy
Then itching beyond control of sensitivity

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Curtis White Date: 5/26/2011 8:57:00 PM You are to be dressed in a garden. Login to Reply

Curtis White Date: 5/26/2011 8:55:00 PM I see you had to pay a price for this one. Very good. Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 4/14/2011 10:06:00 PM You must be sweet! Sorry bout your Bee-hind. ~JSLambert Login to Reply

Stacey Watts Date: 4/11/2011 4:13:00 PM Ouch! I hope you are better. I do know how that feels and it does not feel good. This was really well written and thank you for your kind words. Login to Reply

Delysia Hendricks Date: 4/10/2011 6:07:00 PM Good one, Doris Your description is so vivid you have me itching all over. A well-written and entertaining piece. Login to Reply

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 4/10/2011 5:49:00 PM I'll kiss it better :-) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/7/2011 8:59:00 AM U thought right Doris and appreciate the passage as all are inspired by the Spirit of God and needed to exist on Earth... thankxx luv.. hope everyone is feeling fine .. Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 4/7/2011 6:29:00 AM This write has perfect flow dear poet ! I just love this one...to mine favz if ya don't mind Doris ! Have a blessed week....much love, james Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/6/2011 5:41:00 PM i got one sting from a wasp and ouch. this was a cute liirle piece. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/6/2011 5:01:00 PM there as to be a moral here somewhere doris, love the poem, regards 'Purple Haze' the name in our area of Yorkshire comes from the purple heather on the moors, in certain light gives off a shimmering effect, long before Jimi Hendricks was around. thanks for you warm comments. Harry Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/6/2011 4:52:00 PM Oh! well Doris you could look on this as a suffering for your Art episod'e in which case i prescribe a compress of baking-soda, hope you don't mind my levity today? Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/6/2011 4:50:00 PM Yikes!! I'm so afraid of wasps and bees, Doris. I see the humor in this poem, but feel sorry for you if this really happened. Scary to even think about this. Love you, Carolyn Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/6/2011 1:56:00 PM This is ouchy. I know because I have been stung. Funny, but I can put my hand into a swarm of bees and nothing happens. But wasps? OUCH! Love, daver Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/6/2011 4:51:00 AM Oh how awful if true Doris and hope u are feeling better than ouchy now.. great creative lines and soon wasp season will be in full bloom especially as temps rise up.. a wonderful bit of sweet humor early morn read luv.. hope u and Mom are doing well luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2011 2:24:00 PM I like how ASAP also looks like wasp. Very clever. And also looks like the word for where he could bite ya from behind. haha. Adorable and fun to read!! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/5/2011 1:03:00 PM Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry Doris. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Timothy Brumley Date: 4/5/2011 12:30:00 PM Ouch! It's never a good idea to garden in a dress, pants are a gardeners dress, unless of course your trying to attract another kind of bee that has a more pleasant sting:) I enjoyed our chat, call again sometimes. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/5/2011 11:21:00 AM Enjoyed reading your work about a bad event in your life...I hope that does not happen again..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I have posted my contest..Make sure you read it all the way down so that you can get all the rules and regulations..Mom Login to Reply