Loose Knit

Loose Knit
by Michael R. Burch 

She blesses the needle,
fetches fine red stitches,
criss-crossing, embroidering dreams
in the delicate fabric.
 
And if her hand jerks and twitches in puppet-like fits,
she tells herself
reality is not as threadbare as it seems ...
that a little more darning may gather loose seams.
 
She weaves an unraveling tapestry
of fatigue and remorse and pain; ...
only the nervously pecking needle
pricks her to motion, again and again.
 
Published by The Chariton Review, Penumbra, Black Bear Review, Triplopia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 20, 2019 at 3:38 AM
a little more darning... I love that... This was beautiful. Excellent pen. Ann
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November 20, 2019 at 12:21 PM
I'm glad you liked my poem and thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
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