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Loose Hearts

Loose hearts, Linger,separate, Tear apart. Loose hearts, Shrink.wilt, Twig of life sours tart. Loose hearts, crumble,shudder viscous words shoot in blacken darts. Loose hearts, tighten,strengthen, venture towards a mended start. Loose hearts, weep, tangle, unite. Love sprinkled over happy a la carte.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 5:07:00 AM

Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Robin. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/21/2009 11:43:00 AM

wow i enjoy your style of writing

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/19/2009 10:13:00 AM

Very interesting analysis of all the capabilities and potentials of "loose hearts." Like the upbeat tone in the last line. The way the hearts "venture toward a mended start" and "unite" provide hope that is often missing in love poems. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/18/2009 1:42:00 PM

wonderful-and very good a la carte you sprinkled here-charma

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/17/2009 2:45:00 PM

Oh the journeys of the heart. Often complicated, always emotional. Awesome write. Love, Shar

Nikhita S

Date: 4/17/2009 11:11:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments. I really like your style of writing, it just flows effortlessly. Nikhita.