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I slip under Like deep thunder The sun ending

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 4:28:00 PM
What an interesting form, I really must give this a try, and thanks for your comments on my poem, there is lots of unsaid meaning in my poem, much unwritten~~
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:13:00 AM
This is really cool!
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:18:00 PM
Nice attempt at Than-Bauk
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Tim B
Date: 8/1/2011 11:03:00 PM
Thanks, but does "attempt" imply that I screwed up somewhere? A learning experience is priceless, would appreciate criticism :)

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