Loose Ends and Fallling Down Over Untied Laces.
There is this feeling I don't like
Loose ends
They drive me crazy
It's like when you fall asleep on the floor watching TV and you wake up
The TV is still going and all the lights are still on
You're drooling everywhere.
And you've been out cold for a couple of hours.
It's that feeling of, "What the heck happened?"
What did I miss?
And then you are so exhausted that you just get up and shut off the TV
And then stalk off to your room
Then you wake up the next day and that feeling is even worse,
Especially the second you wake up in the morning and you are
Tired
Grouchy
And just plain not doing good,
That feeling of loose ends just makes you want to cry.
Its so irritating... just rubbing..rubbing
Rubbing you the wrong way.
Because you fell asleep the night before on your living room floor
Thus creating billions of loose ends.
And uneasy feelings
Its terrible
Loose ends...I hate them
I just hate the feeling that something is out of place
Or the fact that you missed something huge.
Something worthwhile
And you missed it because you were asleep on your living room floor
Something is seriously wrong.
Its like something was supposed to happen
And the fact that it didn't, makes everything all fall out of wack.
And get messed up
I hate loose ends.
Copyright © Christan Cote | Year Posted 2006
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