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Loose Change

If I had a nickel, I'd sell something, flip it to a dime. If I had a dime, I'd stand around and loiter, maybe someone would hand me a quarter. If I had a quarter, I'd bet it on a pony, win, and get me a dollar. Heck! If I had that dollar, everything up to that, why even bother.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2019 9:53:00 PM

I think this is quite good. I hope your hands overflow with whatever maintains a peaceful state of mind. Enough to flow to others but not so much that you forget to be thankful.

Kenneth Brenner
Date: 6/28/2019 10:15:00 PM

I'm so fortunate Richard..in many ways..Thankful??..maybe could be a bit more..i value life and all that goes with it..God Bless you always Rich..i appreciate you taking time to read my works..and much more that your comments. :-)