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Happy like buttered popcorn at a matinee They see they feel they leach from me. Have become the seasoning Have become the salt Deprive your self not Fill your bowl with the drool of me Hair raising sensation of a twisting rag Bile rising Ah please rub, discharge the overload Smell the ozone CRACK! Deflate, the me Red balloon strung Hobbled horse Towered origami edged crane, broken wing misery mine, yours, ink seep on a white page. Trance dancer edging toward the blue of my purple prose. Violet coming of the id to coconut oil fakings. Happy, ahhhhhhhh, exalted, crucified, repeat. *Inspired BY Bi-Polar Bear by Connor Jordan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/19/2010 5:21:00 PM
wow! D.G. I was just thinking about writing me a funny bi-polar poem. Enjoyed,, smiles and hugs right back at you,..p.d.
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:24:00 AM
All I can think about is how much I wanted a "Baby Ruth" candy bar yesterday. CRAVING!!! First desire for candy in months. I repressed the urge. Then, I read your poem. Buttered popcorn...drool...coconut oil. My mind took it all out of context. LOL! Then, I smiled and said to myself, "After that buttered sweet potato with walnuts, raisins, and cinnamon, who needs a Babyruth bar? I must have gotten it out of my "bi-polar system! LOL!!! Enjoyed your poem. Love you. Dane Ann
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Date: 8/24/2010 8:04:00 AM
I think you captured the spirit of one who is bi-polar, Deborah. Like the quick meter in this poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:25:00 AM
Well TEACH u pulled out ALL the stops with this write.. luv your title.. perfection.. and had to read twice .. to absorb... luv the CRACK right in the center of it all... amazing the idea .. free verse lives.. luv.. ciao..pupil...
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Date: 8/24/2010 6:52:00 AM
Deborah that was interesting to say the least
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Date: 8/24/2010 6:14:00 AM
Wow...I don't know what to say...I feel bipolar!
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