Loony

Fling frolic fierce
Ply pretty pierce
Trade thoughtful tears


Fashion feeds fame
Troubles try tame
Niche naughty name


Leave laughter loud
Pry petty proud
Aim art aloud


Sense surreal sights
Lines linger light
Freeze-frame free flight


Fear flavours fall
Grime gifting gall
Boom blazing ball


Curves crowding curls
Use urge unfurls
Soothe sensuous swirls


Take treasured thought
Nurture nice naught
Ponder prime plot


Make movement mime
Treat tender times
Rest rowdy rhymes


Live laughter's lease
Pain plunders peace
Etch encores ease




Leon Enriquez
15 December 2014
Singapore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Roper Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Good Alliteration, Leon, Blessings
Enriquez Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 6:42 PM
Dear Eve: Thank you. Leon
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Nice, Leon. Is it a particular form going by syllable count?
Enriquez Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 6:49 PM
Dear Andrea: Thank you. I use syllable count to moderate the voice movement, and also to stick to a certain pattern. It is a very useful brevity tool. Hope this helps, Andrea. All the best then, Leon.
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