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Looks Like Cupid Missed the Mark

I told her at work I been bizzy She got mad and threw a big hizzy Thus I've been in a bit of a tizzy Tryin to fix things with Lizzy So I say I’ll come see her again (How many weeks has THAT been?) If I knock on her door in chagrin I’ll take a left hook to the chin She ain’t buyin no more of my junk Seems my Love Boat came in but it sunk So I guess I’ll go out and get drunk (Then consider becoming a monk)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/30/2016 2:57:00 PM
LOL... Good one.
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:08:00 AM
This left a big smile on my face Tim. Big congratulations on your win! ; )
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! :) Enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:02:00 AM
Congrats on your placement Tim!
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:16:00 AM
Wow a lovely poem Tim.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/23/2016 5:38:00 PM
Tim Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you greatly Tim, for entering my contest it was an honor reading:)
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Date: 2/20/2016 4:39:00 AM
Love it Tim, especially that last line!!! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:32:00 PM
oh my, I do love the way you gave it a humorous touch, Tim.. Hope ROyal has a funny bone!!!
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:51:00 AM
Humorous take on that familiar pain. Well written piece, never know what the future shall bring though.
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:40:00 AM
:-) Just like you to come out with something funny from your heartache. Enjoyed this write, Tim...but not your pain! All the best. :-)
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