Tim Ryerson Poet Rhyme

Looks Like Cupid Missed the Mark

I told her at work I been bizzy
She got mad and threw a big hizzy
Thus I've been in a bit of a tizzy
Tryin to fix things with Lizzy

So I say I’ll come see her again
(How many weeks has THAT been?)
If I knock on her door in chagrin
I’ll take a left hook to the chin

She ain’t buyin no more of my junk
Seems my Love Boat came in but it sunk
So I guess I’ll go out and get drunk
(Then consider becoming a monk)

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Carol Eastman June 30, 2016 at 2:57 PM LOL... Good one.

Connie Marcum Wong May 9, 2016 at 1:08 AM This left a big smile on my face Tim. Big congratulations on your win! ; )

Susan Gentry February 25, 2016 at 10:52 PM Congratulations on your win! :) Enjoyed reading this one.

Balveen Cheema February 25, 2016 at 10:02 AM Congrats on your placement Tim!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2016 at 4:16 AM Wow a lovely poem Tim.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 5:38 PM Tim Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Royal Ninja February 23, 2016 at 11:19 AM Thank you greatly Tim, for entering my contest it was an honor reading:)

Laura Breidenthal February 20, 2016 at 4:39 AM Love it Tim, especially that last line!!! Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2016 at 7:32 PM oh my, I do love the way you gave it a humorous touch, Tim.. Hope ROyal has a funny bone!!!

Dineen Williams Gault February 6, 2016 at 7:51 AM Humorous take on that familiar pain. Well written piece, never know what the future shall bring though.

Kp Nunez February 6, 2016 at 3:40 AM :-) Just like you to come out with something funny from your heartache. Enjoyed this write, Tim...but not your pain! All the best. :-)