Looking Up

How long before the cobwebs grow
on hopes deferred once bright
to toil long in patience grow
only to concede - "hey, it's life"

Tops of mountains beckon come
majestic sights and purest air
yet to perplexities we seem to succumb
when the present finds us ill-prepared

And so we linger looking up
the beloved trek unmade 
for incumbent priorities to lose would crush
as we look with longing and walk away
 
In the vicinity of a perfect dream
gleaning from smiles that slowly grow 
No sail to hoist but the ore rejoiced
for the love with which it rowed

Who can say the choices we make
will in the end prove wise
or show beyond the shadows doubt
to be promises of truth or lies

And so we take a leap of faith
for dreams we live and those we wish
fear and love they coexist
when the choice is choosing a mate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/26/2014 6:38:00 PM
Words of sadness run through this well written piece! The Sarai I know WILL find true love again. There is absolutely no doubt in my mind! I will love you forever, dear heart! XOXOXOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 4/28/2014 2:10:00 AM
Thanks sweetie... Yes I'll find my happy place again. It's just a weird chapter in a really big book. Thx for always encouraging me you sweet sweet soul. Love you!
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