Looking Out

~~ Looking Out ~~

A Poem by Debbie_Philly 

This was inspired by a movie called "August"  with Anthony Hopkins...... the end made me think of this :) Just a little piece.
 
 
Always Looking Out
 
Once there was music... then the music just stopped
Once there was dancing... then the dancing just stopped
Once there was laughter.......
Once sun beat on her face.... then there was only dark
 
Where is the sun?? Where did it all go she asks?
 
But wait....... theres the window... she always 
liked sitting by the.......
 
She sits by the window  never able to leave
her fears keep her there,even in death her
fears keep her there.
Children catch a glimpse and wonder what they
see, no one has lived there in ages.
They should be frightened, instead there is
only pity for her eyes are sad as limpid pools
of blue always teaming with tears for a life
never lived.
 
There is nothing more frightening then the pain
of a soul gone yet trapped in time
Dont look into her eyes they make the heart beat slower....
so slow you can hear it in the dark beating
till the sound is gone and the life is gone
 
Sitting by the window waiting for rescue 
day after day, year after year watching 
the children play.
Once she had hope with passion .. so much passion
Then everything stopped ...... like the beating 
of her heart , when the lights went out
the only brightness came from the glass pane
calling her to a life with no means to live
 
Deborah Mills Kelly
 
4/10/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ludden Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:23 PM
AND here, a look into the eyes of the poet. I'm going to call you the vicarious poet...interesting vision!
Mills-Kelly Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Thank you very much Robert....a beautiful compliment !!
Boskovski Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Nicely written Debbie, a great write Debbie, nicely done. :) xoxo
Mills-Kelly Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Thank you so much dear Chris !! :)
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