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Feb. 14. 2024

Write a Kyrielle Sonnet Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Regina McIntosh

Sun, a flaming ball in the sky Waterlogged lands have long gone dry The soil of the land turned crusty Oh God, on us, have some mercy! Scorched in the fury of the sun, Are hot humid days, with no fun In sultry heat, men go crazy Oh God, on us, have some mercy! Just as water saves lives on land Your grace is needed for our mind Don’t leave our souls dry and hazy Oh God, on us, have some mercy! Sun, a flaming ball in the sky Oh God, on us, have some mercy!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/16/2024 10:08:00 AM

Climate change is merciless to us humans on planet earth. We have used and abused earth for greed and now has come the time to pay for our actions . Is the weather very hot where you live Valsa I'm so sorry. We on the other hand have had severe floods in Natal and we had rain up until a few day ago and sometimes cold weather when we should have had summer. We are in the third month of Summer and the weather is now very hot, lets see what Autumn brings Lovely poem my friend, H and B Jen

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/14/2024 1:04:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful write. Oh yes, God have mercy on us... Happy Valentine’s Day..........................

Jay Narain

Date: 2/14/2024 11:02:00 AM

Great poem. Powerful refrain.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/14/2024 9:33:00 AM

Exquisitely and artfully crafted, the melodic refrain in your composition, Valsa, is truly captivating. Your sincere supplication, elegantly expressed in the form of a Kyrielle, is undeniably enchanting. In a world bereft of compassion, where kindness appears to have evaporated like the arid desert, we desperately yearn for the rejuvenating waters of divine healing. Apologies for the digression. Best wishes for the contest

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/14/2024 9:06:00 AM

a stunning write, Valsa. The refrain drives home a powerful point....one I say every day as I ponder upon the nature of the world today. Our world is a desert, kindness has seemingly dried up as has the desert. We need God's healing waters. Okay rambling. A masterpiece. Am faving, hugs, Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/14/2024 9:06:00 AM

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/14/2024 4:14:00 AM

Valsa, your heartfelt prayer is so beautifully penned as a Kyrielle! It is just all-round lovely!!! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/13/2024 11:50:00 PM

Powerfully and eloquently penned, beautiful refrain, good luck in the contest, Valsa

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2024 10:48:00 PM

Terrible situation. The earth would become a desert. Loved the refrain.