Looking For You

Just when the day’s shade closes in 
Beneath the pleasant hush of night,
I find a secret box; I  grin
With  the thought it is darn forthright;
To unlock the key that’s well kept-
Your emerald  necklace, my gift;
Maybe so treasured still, except
These fingers grasp a plane ticket .
Though our love is near the edge
Of slicing the most bitter hour;
While an amend much late the pledge—
I drop your favourite flower.


A secret box, your favorite flower, a plane ticket
28th Dec, 2015
For Contest, Laura Loo
Combination Of Three Words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 19, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Jajosh, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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December 28, 2015 at 6:44 AM
not yet too late to bring the flowers and run to the airport... superb write, jajosh and thanks for coming over!..huggs
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