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I conceive How over the years many treasures have Been lost to the sea. There's much to achieve For I perceive There's a way to set these treasures free. I conceive There'll be no room for any one not to Believe Once they see. There's much to achieve Oh! The stories people will weave About the sea. I conceive We will retrieve These treasures after tea. There's much to achieve Heave! My men heave! Bring up the treasure chest that I can Open with this here key. I conceive There's much to achieve.

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Date: 7/29/2018 10:59:00 PM
So this is what a villanelle is! Wow! I like it, and of course it is about buried treasure which makes it even more exciting to me as my gamers name is Pirate Grandma. Good job, Bette.
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Bette Bavington
Date: 7/29/2018 11:05:00 PM
Thank you for the visit. I am glad you liked it. I think your name as a gamer is fantastic. I hope you have a great evening.
Date: 7/29/2018 7:38:00 PM
Your villanelle is an absolute treasure, Bette.. Such a pleasure to read.. So enchanting and wonderful! Blessings..
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Date: 7/29/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thank you for visiting. I am glad you liked it. I hope you have a great evening.

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