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Looking For Real Better Life

So, What is real? In a life of mystery in an ongoing wheel. So, What is real? When the value no longer appeal So, What is matters? When no one cares to feel. When you start to look around; Seek for anything that would sound. Open your eyes and see what on the ground. Look so close and take quickly what was found; Keep it in a place where people would share it as you expound The truth of real life; say it aloud for anyone likes to redound Looking forward to better future and ever crowned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 4:32:00 PM
bit of problem here...soupmail..Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:05:00 AM
Awesome work. ~Rain
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Date: 5/30/2010 8:44:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your very cretive write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:50:00 AM
Hope is the only answer to look for real better life.
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