Looking For Real Better Life

So, What is real?
In a life of mystery in an ongoing wheel.
So, What is real?
When the value no longer appeal
So, What is matters? 
When no one cares to feel.

When you start to look around;
Seek for anything that would sound.
Open your eyes and see what on the ground.
Look so close and take quickly what was found;
Keep it in a place where people would share it as you expound
The truth of real life; say it aloud for anyone likes to redound
Looking forward to better future and ever crowned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 4:32 PM
bit of problem here...soupmail..Light & Love
Loveless Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Awesome work. ~Rain
Sweetheart Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 8:44 AM
So enjoyed reading your very cretive write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:50 AM
Hope is the only answer to look for real better life.
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