Looking For Old Souls

People watching today at the optometrist                                                                                         I was looking for old souls                                                                                                                Sometimes impatient  they appear as if everyone should know whats going on by now         Their in a hurry and always act like you are wasting their time                                                        Then you spot a few souls with all the time in the world with loving and kind gestures                               Souls  on a mission that look as comfortable as the day is long                                                   Glad to be here                                                                                                                                 And smiling because they know everyone makes it home in th end                                            Smiling becouse they know everyone finds their own perfection                                                    In the clear and unending preasents of God                                                                                 Think about it God dosen't make nock offs                                                                                     And God made you with the same love and care that God puts into everything else                    This world is an illusion                                                                                                                             Tailor made with the  expeariance that you need to lift the vale from your eyes                             So that you may one day see wonders that you have only dared to dream of
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Duncan Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Hello Michael ,,, nice write on spiritual things and illusions down here. (((happy summer)))
Rain Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 12:43 AM
well done , beautiful spiritual write ..
Sanders Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Nicely done poet
Deschler Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Beautifully written! I love this poem! I think I am one of those so called "old souls".
Thomas Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 6:21 AM
How true this is ,,what an illusion we are in....this message is so real & deep. Thanks micheal for a great reality check today one<3 Cherie
Carrillo Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 10:23 PM
I love this. This world is an illusion - I too believe that. I have seen wonders in my dreams and when I wake up - they are gone. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 3:20 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..I am glad that I stopped by...Sara
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 1:48 AM
Exceptional poetic muse esp how u say 'tailor made world n how its an illusion', im with u on dat big time! Kudos.
Ryerson Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 2:58 AM
I have seen far too many of the first souls you mentioned and far too few of the others...Great observations Michael - Tim
Delaney Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 11:08 AM
What a wonderful up lifting message to read today. I am adding to all my favorites to read over. SuZ
Morgan Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 9:29 PM
very nice. . .enjoyed it
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 3:33 AM
- Proficient written and interesting Michael - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Newman Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 12:31 AM
Well done enjoyed this poem, yes I have found perfection within GOD's presents, I am glad to be here though I find from time to Time, I too waste time, I have a mission and that is to make it home, great write my friend, blessings sueellen
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