Looking For Miss Demeanour

 As the days  grow longer 
and the temperature warmer  
even this old man's fancy 
turns  to outdoor saunters. 
Perhaps to find on quiet stroll 
a miss whose demeanour 
is also out of all control. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Robertson Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Wonderful, Short and sweet.
Rodgers Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Hi Milton, Thanks for stoppig by and leaving ayour comment. Glad you enjoyed. Dave
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Love the humour in the title it pulled me in and I found a very clever write:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:13 PM
ooh thanks Dave - there is hope for me still! Hugs jan xx
Rodgers Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Thanks Jan - in one of the SF books I read as an adolescent, humour was considered one of the prerequisites for an intelligent/sapient species.
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