Looking For Emotions

I look for emotions from you when you are a fighting sky. The sparks look first golden like your heart and then silvern like your silence. I use them in my cup of poetry.
I seek them from you when you are knitting the story of rain. I love the way you do it for the soil in turmoil and for my dream as well. None can live without a dream. Our sweet realities we very often get in ecstasy from our dream, woven with your hands, woven with the fluffy wool of cloud. 

I look for emotions from you when you are rain coming down in heavy downpour all on a sudden delighting the girl planting saplings of rice in the field. She looks for an umbrella and if possible a coloured one she came across in the city that she visited to participate in a marriage ceremony and was on the roof with the brother of the groom, when the rains came.

The more I can hear and touch your emotions the more are the likes my poems earn.
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July 13, 2017 // For Contest: Show Me: Sponsored by: Catie Lindsey

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Date: 7/15/2017 12:48:00 PM
A ride through myraid emotions Probir :) A beauty! :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/14/2017 12:29:00 PM
There's so much to this. I love the "knitting" and the "wool". I love the "heavy downpour". A story within a story. You are blessed to have such inspiration Probir. I add my like to the countless others.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2017 9:03:00 AM
Awe ... So nice ... It is certainly not countless ... Still your visit and comments are most welcome ... Thank you ...
Date: 7/13/2017 2:38:00 PM
Fascinating how poetry has a magic spell in our emotions to ink them on a parchment. Nicely said
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/13/2017 2:23:00 PM
Explosive emotions that move the heart and mind my friend, Probir! Great writing my friend! Good luck!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2017 9:08:00 AM
Merely saying thanks is inadequate ... But I am poor at English ... THANK you ...
Date: 7/13/2017 8:05:00 AM
I absolutely love this one Probir. I hope it does well in the contest ! :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/13/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
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