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Looking For Answers

I walk slow
Through the forest
Alone 
Inside my mind
Where I am looking 
For answers
Sometimes
I find them 
Sometimes
I find glue
Stuck in thoughts
That circle around 
I step off the pathway
Wait
A new path opens


written:  8-31-2019
Yalto poems only Poetry Contest
1st Place Premium  Thank You Emile
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  
3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Sponsor:   Emile Pinet

Copyright © Jeanne Mcgee | Year Posted 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/4/2020 10:04:00 PM Jeanne, this is a brilliant reflective Yalto! I see why Emile honored you with a Trophy. Congratulations! I am very happy for you! I came back for a second read! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/5/2020 12:23:00 PM Hi Connie, Thank you for coming back for a read...and I am really enjoying his book of poetry.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/22/2020 1:44:00 PM Hello Jeanne McGee, take the new path and see where it leads. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/25/2020 7:09:00 PM hello Jeannie McGee,You it could work out. Enjoy your evening my friend. Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/22/2020 4:14:00 PM Hello! sometimes too many choices...but I like your idea to see where it leads.

David Sherman Date: 10/22/2019 1:18:00 PM it has a flow that is hard to match well done makes me think lol nice. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/2/2019 2:05:00 PM Congratulations on your Trophy win Jeanne! Very well deserved! I loved this contemplative piece. xxoo Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/2/2019 2:44:00 PM Thank you Connie. It sure was a surprise!

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/1/2019 2:36:00 PM Great job - a well deserved win! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/1/2019 4:09:00 PM CayCay...so nice to see you again. And thank you so much for your kind words. xoxo

Beata Agustin Date: 10/1/2019 12:37:00 AM Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/1/2019 4:08:00 PM thanks for coming by for a read. Poetry Soup is such a wonderful place to learn and share.

Heidi Sands Date: 9/30/2019 9:00:00 PM Congratulations for your top win Jeanne :) Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/1/2019 4:07:00 PM Hey Heidi, thanks for the read. Last couple of days have been glue but the path is opening again.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/30/2019 8:52:00 PM Congratulations and this is a wonderful poem. Bless you dear Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/30/2019 9:11:00 PM Thank your my friend.

John Hamilton Date: 9/30/2019 1:30:00 PM Great write congrats Jeanne on your top win! Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/1/2019 4:06:00 PM gracias. I've been in glue today!

Edward Ibeh Date: 9/30/2019 12:45:00 PM Back with congrats on a deserving win, Jeanne!:-) Great stuff! Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/1/2019 4:05:00 PM Thanks Edward. I look forward to trying your form again soon. I like how it has impact.

David Drowley Date: 9/30/2019 11:41:00 AM 'Jeanne, Congratulations on your win! Very well done. David' Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/30/2019 9:11:00 PM thank you David

Sandra Adams Date: 9/30/2019 11:36:00 AM Congratulations on your top win...great penning...i often find the glue too and have to step away for a bit :) hugs Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/30/2019 9:10:00 PM I'm finding this to be something many people experience...nice to know I'm not the only one.

P.S. Awtry Date: 9/30/2019 10:44:00 AM Congratulations Jeanne! Like Caren, I too appreciated "Sometimes I find glue Stuck in thoughts That circle around" That is a great line! Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/30/2019 9:09:00 PM Thanks for the read...always nice to have someone feel the same way.

David Mohn Date: 9/30/2019 10:36:00 AM Big congratulations Jeanne! Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 9/30/2019 10:24:00 AM Congratulations Jeanne, your poem has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/30/2019 7:04:00 PM Thank you Emile. I am honored by your selection. It was so fun to try a new form too. Great one Edward.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/10/2019 3:23:00 AM "Sometimes I find them Sometimes I find glue" this made me dance and laugh! Jeanne, great job! Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 8/31/2019 10:15:00 PM Wow, well done; best of luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 8/31/2019 5:21:00 PM Nicely done, Jeanne:-) Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply