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I walk slow Through the forest Alone Inside my mind Where I am looking For answers Sometimes I find them Sometimes I find glue Stuck in thoughts That circle around I step off the pathway Wait A new path opens written: 8-31-2019 Yalto poems only Poetry Contest 1st Place Premium Thank You Emile Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Sponsor: Emile Pinet
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 10:04 PM
Jeanne, this is a brilliant reflective Yalto! I see why Emile honored you with a Trophy. Congratulations! I am very happy for you! I came back for a second read! Blessings xxoo
Mcgee Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Hi Connie, Thank you for coming back for a read...and I am really enjoying his book of poetry.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Hello Jeanne McGee, take the new path and see where it leads. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 7:09 PM
hello Jeannie McGee,You it could work out. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Mcgee Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 4:14 PM
Hello! sometimes too many choices...but I like your idea to see where it leads.
Sherman Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 1:18 PM
it has a flow that is hard to match well done makes me think lol nice.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on your Trophy win Jeanne! Very well deserved! I loved this contemplative piece. xxoo
Mcgee Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Connie. It sure was a surprise!
Godwin Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Great job - a well deserved win! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Mcgee Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 4:09 PM
CayCay...so nice to see you again. And thank you so much for your kind words. xoxo
Agustin Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 12:37 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Mcgee Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 4:08 PM
thanks for coming by for a read. Poetry Soup is such a wonderful place to learn and share.
Sands Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win Jeanne :)
Mcgee Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Hey Heidi, thanks for the read. Last couple of days have been glue but the path is opening again.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Congratulations and this is a wonderful poem. Bless you dear
Mcgee Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Thank your my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Great write congrats Jeanne on your top win!
Mcgee Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 4:06 PM
gracias. I've been in glue today!
Ibeh Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Back with congrats on a deserving win, Jeanne!:-) Great stuff!
Mcgee Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Thanks Edward. I look forward to trying your form again soon. I like how it has impact.
Drowley Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 11:41 AM
'Jeanne, Congratulations on your win! Very well done. David'
Mcgee Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:11 PM
thank you David
Adams Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your top win...great penning...i often find the glue too and have to step away for a bit :) hugs
Mcgee Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:10 PM
I'm finding this to be something many people experience...nice to know I'm not the only one.
Awtry Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations Jeanne! Like Caren, I too appreciated "Sometimes I find glue Stuck in thoughts That circle around" That is a great line!
Mcgee Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Thanks for the read...always nice to have someone feel the same way.
Mohn Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:36 AM
Big congratulations Jeanne!
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations Jeanne, your poem has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Mcgee Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Thank you Emile. I am honored by your selection. It was so fun to try a new form too. Great one Edward.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:23 AM
"Sometimes I find them Sometimes I find glue" this made me dance and laugh! Jeanne, great job!
Kiser Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Wow, well done; best of luck in the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Nicely done, Jeanne:-) Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest!
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