Looking Beyond

A space no one can hear you
That room inside your head
A loft of information
Thoughts whirring round in bed

A brain with constant aching 
So fearful and so mixed 
A mind which keeps on breaking
And desperate to be fixed

To battle hard with darkness 
Without seeing any light
Putting on a brave face
Inside a great big fight

A choice not made so lightly
Perhaps regret too late
Making that decision 
To take your own sweet fate

We take a lot for granted
Absorbed in our own strife
Racing round like robots
And missing out on life

Look beyond your person
Be kind to those you see
Inside they could be yearning
To share their thoughts with thee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Atkinson Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 5:12 PM
Ruth, Excellent word-craftmanship. Rare.
Turner Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 8:55 AM
This is a wonderful poem, Ruth. Great message!
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