Looking Back At the Past

I stared along the littered street,
Recalled a former time,
Remembered walking hand in hand,
One day when you were mine.

And then I gasped and looked again -
I saw us standing there,
A younger you was kissing me,
I told myself,’ Beware.’

I stood alone and watched us kiss,
And couldn’t change the past:
The way we parted had to be; 
Our love would never last.

I blinked my tears and saw us fade
And once more you were gone:
The age old sense of loss intense,
I sighed and carried on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Arowolo Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:51 AM
Nice write with strong feelings,Brain.Congratulations on your well deserved win...
Brown Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "You Pick Again" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 12:50 AM
An emotional write here.Congrats on your win jack.
Johnson Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Poignant poem, Jack. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Wow. I can feel the sense of loss here. I expected it to continue on until I realized there really wasn't anything further you could add. Life goes on. Loved it. Going to my favs.
Long Avatar
November 27, 2011 at 7:40 AM
congrats on your win with this outstanding poem. cory
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 12:45 PM
I thought that I commented on this one but apparently I did not..Sad when one thinks about a love that went wrong...Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
Macfarlane Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 3:07 PM
If only we could change the past eh......good write Jack!
Lane Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Sometimes bittersweet is the best.
Neels Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 2:59 PM
This is quite gripping Jack, somehow I can relate to this jewel of yours.. sad write, also love the message that we need to carry on :) love Wilma
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