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Looking Back At the Past

I stared along the littered street, Recalled a former time, Remembered walking hand in hand, One day when you were mine. And then I gasped and looked again - I saw us standing there, A younger you was kissing me, I told myself,’ Beware.’ I stood alone and watched us kiss, And couldn’t change the past: The way we parted had to be; Our love would never last. I blinked my tears and saw us fade And once more you were gone: The age old sense of loss intense, I sighed and carried on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/28/2011 10:51:00 AM
Nice write with strong feelings,Brain.Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "You Pick Again" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2011 12:50:00 AM
An emotional write here.Congrats on your win jack.
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Date: 11/27/2011 10:34:00 AM
Poignant poem, Jack. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/27/2011 8:28:00 AM
Wow. I can feel the sense of loss here. I expected it to continue on until I realized there really wasn't anything further you could add. Life goes on. Loved it. Going to my favs.
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Date: 11/27/2011 7:40:00 AM
congrats on your win with this outstanding poem. cory
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Date: 11/25/2011 12:45:00 PM
I thought that I commented on this one but apparently I did not..Sad when one thinks about a love that went wrong...Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2011 3:07:00 PM
If only we could change the past eh......good write Jack!
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Date: 11/24/2011 3:06:00 PM
Sometimes bittersweet is the best.
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Date: 11/24/2011 2:59:00 PM
This is quite gripping Jack, somehow I can relate to this jewel of yours.. sad write, also love the message that we need to carry on :) love Wilma
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