Looking Back

Through the years
You look back
And realize
How very few people
Loved you
Unconditionally
The fact is
So few are
Even capable of it
And as we age
Though many become
Crusty and stale
Others choose to be
Mellow and warm
How beautiful to see
People being kind freely
With their childlike smile
Dispensing happiness
Like Halloween candy
Unconditionally



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Scars Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 1:59 PM
so true! Good luck Sweet Line :)- luloo
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Laura Loo.
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