Kash Poet Poet Senryu

Looking Back

Starting from zero
learning to walk like a child...
A life without you.

unknown path lying
each step longs for your guidance...
No milestones ahead.

let me stumble Dad
I will get up on my own...
a new beginning.



© kash poet (19th June 2011)
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Ralph Taylor June 24, 2012 at 2:53 PM Congrats, Kash. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2012 at 7:20 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "father & beyond" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 21, 2012 at 5:42 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!

Poet Destroyer A June 20, 2012 at 10:04 PM KASH, Congratulations for your heartfelt poem. Thank you for supporting my contest;-) Good night~PD...LOL... DOUBLE

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2011 at 10:10 PM Kash, Congratulations on your contest entry! Thank you for entering your dedicated poem in my contest and also for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night. Sorry for the late congrats,..p.d

Jack Horne July 13, 2011 at 2:22 PM Many congrats on all your recent wins, Kash : )

Ralph Taylor July 13, 2011 at 11:54 AM Congrats on your win, Kashinath. Nice going. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2011 at 10:46 AM Congratulations Kashinath for your win in the contest "best dedication poem" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol

Juanita Warden July 13, 2011 at 10:37 AM My Congratulations on your win sponsored by P.D...I also have a poem Looking Back..Great poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2011 at 8:29 AM Congrats Kashinath on another exciting win in PD's contest with this stirring sensitive write my friend.. always appreciate your comments so much ..luv..

Michael J. Falotico July 13, 2011 at 4:49 AM Congrats to you on your win my poet friend....Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta July 13, 2011 at 4:12 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., kashinath

Charlotte Puddifoot July 13, 2011 at 3:28 AM congrats on your win in the dedication contest with this lovely set of senryus :-)

Elizabeth Wesley June 28, 2011 at 6:34 AM Filled with hope and tenderness Kashi, thanks for your visit

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2011 at 11:03 PM hey,this is so cool, Kash. It seems to be not for any contest? Just you writing what you want to write? Or am I wrong? Anyway, very nicely done, my friend!

Nette Onclaud June 19, 2011 at 12:26 PM care to visit?? come!... hope you'll have something new soon, kashi! :) huggs

Carolyn Devonshire June 19, 2011 at 12:01 PM Such a heartwarming senryu series, Kash. Is it an entry for Lay's "My Children" contest? Parents want their children's lives to be perfect, but young people learn more from their own mistakes. Awesome, dear friend! Love, Carolyn

James Foulk June 19, 2011 at 9:29 AM very beautiful and tender write. thank you for commenting on Father's Day Wish.

James Fraser June 19, 2011 at 9:10 AM Nice one Kashinath, love the wisdom in your words :)

Dr.Ram Mehta June 19, 2011 at 8:29 AM Touchy and moving eotions, kashinath

Zzzzz Zzzzz June 19, 2011 at 4:50 AM A heartfelt and poignant write. You sum up the situation poetically and succinctly in 9 short lines. All the more touching as it is Father's Day today. Kind regards, Robert.

Wilma Neels June 19, 2011 at 3:05 AM this is a beautiful write Kash, can just feel the emotion.. Happy Father's Day to you my friend :)

Nette Onclaud June 19, 2011 at 3:01 AM what the....kashi! so touching; i miss my dad a lot.. this is top-rate poetry! :) happy father's day with huggs