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Looking Back

I am in awe of her beauty, a laugh that lights a room, a presence that can't be ignored. I am caught and can't escape. She is out of my reach, a space between us. I want to talk and get close but no, there is no chance. I can't get near She is more than me, I am nothing to her. I can't get close, a canyon grows I retreat from the edge until I burst and shout at how I am hooked But I am an unthinking fool, and now the chasm is too big to cross. She's on one side looking away. I on the other looking back.

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Date: 10/22/2023 2:54:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/21/2023 8:54:00 AM
Dear Mark, the longing for a love out of reach is truly palpable in the pain of your expressive passionate verse. A very moving piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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