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Looking At You

looking at you becomes calm waves rushing ashore a gentle caressing wind envelopes my soul looking into your eyes my heart sings in a devoted love to the soul therein the sight of your hands become a wanton desire to feel your touch a simper upon the lips is the only temptation i ever wanted in life they say with everything in a single chalice life may hold a perilous chance but having tasted this wine there is no other vineyard where my heart could belong no other reason to take the next breath where i cannot spend time looking at you 5/23 Oregon

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Date: 6/11/2023 10:48:00 AM
Lovely words of devotion and desire, I like it very much, as I do all your poems Tim.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 7/6/2023 9:06:00 AM
thank you Annie....

Book: Shattered Sighs