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Looking at the Stars

Midgets always do Looking strangely at the stars Counting bigger ones Small and big dippers Emit freedom a distance Expressing oneness At times in old days Longing to look at more stars Achieve apogee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/3/2015 11:52:00 PM
Wonderful Spiritual haiku
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Date: 7/2/2014 10:10:00 PM
Wonderful string of Haiku's Marvin. My mind is filled with the image of a very starry, starry night. Thank you for sharing. bfn Lainie
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Elaine George
Date: 7/2/2014 10:21:00 PM
you are much to kind. lol!
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/2/2014 10:14:00 PM
Great thanks Elaine! You are one of the STARs!
Date: 2/1/2014 11:41:00 AM
so many stars glittering on this page.. your 'ku light me up, marvin.. mabuhay ang pinoys!.. huggs
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 2/1/2014 5:36:00 PM
Great Nette, Publish your poems in paper back form soon....
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 2/1/2014 5:31:00 PM
Great Nette! You' are doing well here!
Date: 2/1/2014 4:44:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on dedication and remembrance, marvin
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 2/1/2014 5:01:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram!
Date: 1/31/2014 12:21:00 PM
- Embrace all the stars and share them with someone you love - Moving and great haiku - Well done, Marvin :) - Have a pleasant weekend, relax!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 1/31/2014 7:28:00 PM
Great thanks Anne-lise! Happy Chinese New Year!