Looking At the Stars

Midgets always do
Looking strangely at the stars 
Counting bigger ones

Small and big dippers
Emit freedom a distance
Expressing oneness

At times in old days
Longing to look at more stars
Achieve apogee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 3, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Wonderful Spiritual haiku
George   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 10:10 PM
Wonderful string of Haiku's Marvin. My mind is filled with the image of a very starry, starry night. Thank you for sharing. bfn Lainie
George   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 10:21 PM
you are much to kind. lol!
Celestial Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 10:14 PM
Great thanks Elaine! You are one of the STARs!
Onclaud Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 11:41 AM
so many stars glittering on this page.. your 'ku light me up, marvin.. mabuhay ang pinoys!.. huggs
Celestial Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 5:36 PM
Great Nette, Publish your poems in paper back form soon....
Celestial Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Great Nette! You' are doing well here!
Mehta Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 4:44 AM
Enjoyed the write on dedication and remembrance, marvin
Celestial Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram!
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 12:21 PM
- Embrace all the stars and share them with someone you love - Moving and great haiku - Well done, Marvin :) - Have a pleasant weekend, relax!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Celestial Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 7:28 PM
Great thanks Anne-lise! Happy Chinese New Year!
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