Looking At the Sky

How vast the hopes and

      possibilities I see...

      looking at the sky!


Date written: 12/19/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 7:24 PM
I love this . Reminds me of a commercial currently on tv using the voice of a brilliant scientist and in it, he says, always look up at the sky or something to that effect. Same wonderful message as your senryu.
Ibeh Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments and visit, Andrea:-)
Lane Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 6:32 AM
How little our troubles seem when we gaze at the stars and light of the moon. Quite a lovely Senryu, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Thank you very much, Lin:-) Happy holidays!
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