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Looking at the Moon

Alba, remember, but will you remember me Be where I can see you, but me you will not see For I have been finally, driven underground Returned to where I came, to die without a sound And all because one day, in the month of February An Aura appeared to me, my eyes caressed to see Amidst these living days in absorbency two became No culture, just our pasts, no one was too blame In our living lives we choked, in throw ejected we Poisoned absorbency bled, as we look around and see In decision midst we're lost, to be answered soon Alba, remember, but will you remember us Looking at the moon? " Many thanks Mr Tony Carey for the inspiration through your track title "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 12/14/2011 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing James. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2011 3:36:00 PM
Hello James, Your words echo like a beautiful song all forgot the past. Love your thoughts here As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2011 8:18:00 AM
Interesting work..Not familiar with the subject..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:16:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a fine poetic skill and I am pleased to have found you here on this site. Many thanks for sharing!
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Date: 11/2/2011 9:51:00 AM
wow... this showed disappointment deeply... Not knowing the answer whether she remember or not, did those things leave marks on her heart or not... Enjoyed it a lot, James.. Thanx for stopping by :)
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Date: 11/1/2011 10:03:00 PM
a wonderful piece like a music in itself.
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:36:00 PM
Cool poem, James. Is it for any contest?
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Date: 11/1/2011 4:57:00 PM
Truly marvelous writing of new Sir James, as always your loyal follower...luv shannon
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Date: 11/1/2011 2:55:00 AM
Captivating couplet, emotions evoking from each line, and ending with such wishful wonderment. Great write. Titus
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:55:00 PM
Good day James... enjoyed, Have yourself a wonderful night ;-) God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 10/29/2011 9:07:00 AM have an interesting pen....
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