Looking At the Moon

Alba, remember, but will you remember me
Be where I can see you, but me you will not see

For I have been finally, driven underground
Returned to where I came, to die without a sound

And all because one day, in the month of February
An Aura appeared to me, my eyes caressed to see

Amidst these living days in absorbency two became
No culture, just our pasts, no one was too blame

In our living lives we choked, in throw ejected we
Poisoned absorbency bled, as we look around and see

In decision midst we're lost, to be answered soon
Alba, remember, but will you remember us



Looking at the moon?



" Many thanks Mr Tony Carey for the inspiration through your track title "







http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-16.php
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Date: 12/14/2011 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing James. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2011 3:36:00 PM
Hello James, Your words echo like a beautiful song all forgot the past. Love your thoughts here As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2011 8:18:00 AM
Interesting work..Not familiar with the subject..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:16:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a fine poetic skill and I am pleased to have found you here on this site. Many thanks for sharing!
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Date: 11/2/2011 9:51:00 AM
wow... this showed disappointment deeply... Not knowing the answer whether she remember or not, did those things leave marks on her heart or not... Enjoyed it a lot, James.. Thanx for stopping by :)
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Date: 11/1/2011 10:03:00 PM
a wonderful piece like a music in itself.
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:36:00 PM
Cool poem, James. Is it for any contest?
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Date: 11/1/2011 4:57:00 PM
Truly marvelous writing of new Sir James, as always your loyal follower...luv shannon
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Date: 11/1/2011 2:55:00 AM
Captivating couplet, emotions evoking from each line, and ending with such wishful wonderment. Great write. Titus
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:55:00 PM
Good day James... enjoyed, Have yourself a wonderful night ;-) God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 10/29/2011 9:07:00 AM
James....you have an interesting pen....
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