Looking Around

Life is like 
A chocolate 
Covered lemon
Sweet all around
Sour in the middle
All we have to do 
Is make sure we
look around for 
The sweet stuff
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wiggins Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 9:36 AM
nice pome Jen!!. . .best wishes ~*Breana*~
Haniff Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 12:56 PM
nice Jen! looking for the sweet stuff is really kinda hard sometimes just as Chris said...lol nice one! */*love Maryam
Higgins Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Look around for the sweet stuff takes some work sometimes..like a needle in a haystack.
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