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Look What Happens When You Add Punctuation

Imperfection ... it reveals a flaw, Let's banish this word out the door, Here's a revelation Add some punctuation I'm Perfection ... this phrase I adore! 11/21/20

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Jack Horne

Date: 12/6/2020 12:58:00 PM

LOL, clever play on words, my friend - I hope you're feeling well xx

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/4/2020 4:14:00 PM

Yes, very clever; I like! Hope you're good over there Jan.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/1/2020 8:59:00 PM

Hey Jan … this limerick is very clever indeed. Loved it - Lindsay

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/26/2020 3:54:00 PM

Oh cleverly done, Jan :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/23/2020 5:31:00 AM

You are the queen of wordplay, Jan. Very cleverly written. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs // Charlie xx

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/23/2020 4:21:00 AM

I too adore that phrase Jan... Haha... Good one and well done. Enjoyed reading this. Hugs ~ Ani

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/22/2020 8:22:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan! I needed a break from all the love poems tonight. Thanks for giving it Tom E. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/22/2020 11:24:00 AM

I had to laugh at some of the comments on names this poem received. I remember how astounded I was that Gwyneth Paltrow named her child Apple. I can’t imagine! A very clever poem my friend. I hope you and hubby are doing well? Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/22/2020 10:00:00 AM

Sharp and short and fun, great write Jan. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 11/22/2020 8:18:00 AM

Very clever Jan...enjoyed

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/22/2020 6:10:00 AM

Love this, Jan! A great one. God bless you always

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/22/2020 2:07:00 AM

Ah! A clever one, Jan:)

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/21/2020 5:51:00 PM

How clever Jan... imperfection. applies, to me very much! I am afraid? ... It took me; a few minutes' to understand your perfect limerick/ Take care Shirley *

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/21/2020 11:42:00 AM

ha! love this one, jan! ~ years ago, i taught a sixth grader whose first name was I-Perfection. his brother was Supreme and his sister was Earthly. you can't make this stuff up!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2020 4:25:00 PM

oh gosh what unusual names, got to pity the kids that were lumbered with the... the worst name for me was BOO I commented on it to a teacher... and discovered she was the headmistresses daughter lol:-)