Look Up

look up,
you had never seen this house!
where is my house?
what house are you talking about?
I am talking about my house.
do you know that big building?
no!
well,
it is my apartment up there..
do you live in a rock house?
or in a cement house?
or in a sand house?
where is your window?
it is next to your door.
but its my mother house...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 20, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Good afternoon Marie. The weekend and half this week are gone and this is the first I have had a chance to read. Had so much drama in my life. Really feeling good reading poetry today. Glad yours was among them. Love, Carol
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