James Horn Poet Couplet

Look So Trim

Then there was time that seemed so terrible
Everything that happened was unbearable
I had hoped would never happen again
And God would save me from my sin.

By things like that I have been plagued
While in prayer to God have often begged
I know You truly are the sacred one
Please forgive me for what I have done.

From all of my sins I am now forgiven
God's love is why I continue to be living
And if it really had not been for Him
Then I still would be fat and not look so trim.

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Cherl Dunn November 2, 2014 at 6:19 PM Dear Mr. Horn I've tryed going to the link you sent to me through the http link you sent me but I still can't find you. What should I do. cheri dunn

Aiyah Torres May 8, 2014 at 9:46 AM "ask and He will provide.." ... we always ask forgiveness from our sins, and yet keep on repeating from where we had started. God is so good ,though we're not worth it from His kindness.. He still forgive us. Your poem is filled of faith for our beloved Father in heaven.. Kudos... "Spread The Light! "... :O))

Ettie Christian-Bowling May 6, 2014 at 6:14 PM Oops sorry ment James lol -Love Ettie

Ettie Christian-Bowling May 6, 2014 at 6:07 PM I agree with ya if I hadn't asked for forgiveness and been given it I wouldn't be trim either very good job Matthew-Love Ettie

Sara Kendrick May 6, 2014 at 7:20 AM Great testimony of your faith..A belief in God is the key to all things..Sara

James Horn May 6, 2014 at 6:20 AM "God's love is why I continue to be living" - I like this line. Cigeng