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Look So Trim

Then there was time that seemed so terrible Everything that happened was unbearable I had hoped would never happen again And God would save me from my sin. By things like that I have been plagued While in prayer to God have often begged I know You truly are the sacred one Please forgive me for what I have done. From all of my sins I am now forgiven God's love is why I continue to be living And if it really had not been for Him Then I still would be fat and not look so trim.

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/2/2014 6:19:00 PM

Dear Mr. Horn I've tryed going to the link you sent to me through the http link you sent me but I still can't find you. What should I do. cheri dunn

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/8/2014 9:46:00 AM

"ask and He will provide.." ... we always ask forgiveness from our sins, and yet keep on repeating from where we had started. God is so good ,though we're not worth it from His kindness.. He still forgive us. Your poem is filled of faith for our beloved Father in heaven.. Kudos... "Spread The Light! "... :O))

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 5/6/2014 6:14:00 PM

Oops sorry ment James lol -Love Ettie

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 5/6/2014 6:07:00 PM

I agree with ya if I hadn't asked for forgiveness and been given it I wouldn't be trim either very good job Matthew-Love Ettie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2014 7:20:00 AM

Great testimony of your faith..A belief in God is the key to all things..Sara

James Horn

Date: 5/6/2014 6:20:00 AM

"God's love is why I continue to be living" - I like this line. Cigeng