Virginia Gelok Poet Free verse

Look Please Look

Cars drive past my window
I sit alone and watch.
They pass, completely unaware of my grasping eyes.
Few ever look up.
Even fewer today.
It seems I notice so many faces
and wonder...
"How many of you look down from your window 
as you sit alone and watch?"

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Ken Rone June 24, 2021 at 2:18 PM This is a very nice piece. I sense human nature, melancholy , curiosity. I find it unique. I need to look at more of your work . Best Regards - Ken Virginia Gelok June 24, 2021 at 3:52 PM Ken, Thankyou. But I want you to know I was inspired if you can call it that through letters my deceased son had written. I suddenly realized just how lonely he was. I don't alway write like this,it just seemed fitting.