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Look Please Look

Cars drive past my window I sit alone and watch. They pass, completely unaware of my grasping eyes. Few ever look up. Even fewer today. It seems I notice so many faces and wonder... "How many of you look down from your window as you sit alone and watch?"

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Ken Rone

Date: 6/24/2021 2:18:00 PM

This is a very nice piece. I sense human nature, melancholy , curiosity. I find it unique. I need to look at more of your work . Best Regards - Ken

Virginia Gelok
Date: 6/24/2021 3:52:00 PM

Ken, Thankyou. But I want you to know I was inspired if you can call it that through letters my deceased son had written. I suddenly realized just how lonely he was. I don't alway write like this,it just seemed fitting.