Look Out Girl

Twenty-one has its perks
Low-cut blouses and short mini skirts
Heels so high, no one can deny
You doin it!
Don't rush through as so many do
Take your time, there is only one U
Let blessing and favor be your choice of wear
They'll keep your settled and humble
They won't mess up your hair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 30, 2012 at 5:00 AM
Where did this week go I wonder again. But hey I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Adrienne. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and happiness. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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March 29, 2012 at 12:56 PM
This is a good poem! I enjoyed reading it Its' verses make sense, just take your time and enjoy your life.
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March 29, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Many good wishes for the future.....well done Adrienne. Have a lovely day in sunshine. - oxox Anne-Lise
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March 29, 2012 at 9:45 AM
the joy of growing up is in the journey, the continous novelty of change, growth. i vote go for it, now, enjoy. when you're older you can fall back a little, but then again you dont have to get older - better yet, stay young - i never grew up. thank you, chuck
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