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Try A Triolét Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Kim Merryman. Date written: 07/30/2023

Look No Further

Should you need someone to lean on,
   Try my shoulders; look no further.
Reach out to me from dust till dawn.
Should you need someone to lean on, 
    I'll ensure all your woes are gone;
Your troubles cease extending farther.
Should you need someone to lean on,
   Try my shoulders; look no further.
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Fowler Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Sweet and strong write Edward. I find it comforting. Congratulations! :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 1:09 PM
I love the message in your triolet, Edward. Congrats on the win
Merryman Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Edward, this could be taken as a romantic write or one of friendship. Everyone should have a friend like your triolet portrays. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Kim:-) Most obliged.
Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:42 AM
Great assurance, Edward:)
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thank you very much, Joanna:-)
Dutta Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Lovely! I liked it very much. All the best. Blessings
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thank you very much, Anisha:-)
Hawley Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 6:10 PM
That is a little bit romantic. Good luck in the contest.
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Thank you so much, Miranda:-)
Volumes Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Such a reassuring poem. It really hits home with its message. Well written.
Ibeh Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Thank you very much, SV:-)
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