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Look Down On the Yellow Sub

Flying high in the sky living with not a care no harness there to hold you really feel so very bare It's such an exhilarating thrill now know how birds do feel flying through clouds and skies so free this is the real deal! Everything's so small down there looks just like little small dot at moment I see a yellow thing quite long indeed maybe a plot It's filled with such little people my microscope sees such detail waterproof coats they've got on maybe out on an ocean sail Now could it be a submarine plotting someone's final downfall bright and yellow oh so clear getting closer now total freefall! ( just some thoughts about imagining being a bird flying up high, describe what you see down below.)

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Date: 5/15/2016 10:49:00 AM
Great job here. I could see myself wafting along in a big hot air balloon marveling at all the sights I could see from up there. Wonderful stuff.God Bless, JB
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/15/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Judy, glad you liked it, hope you get down safely!
Date: 5/15/2016 9:48:00 AM
Free falling adventure, wonderful !
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/15/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Constance, glad you loved it, have blessed day, Gordon

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