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Look Closely

Look at me At my green eyes and my blonde hair I'm beautiful Aren't I? Look closer Look at my face Revolutionised to your likings To your expectations You like blue So I sealed my green eyes away in a case file A homicide that will never be solved A cold case you will forget about But will always linger on my mind like brain freeze You like brown So I drenched my hair in crude oil And soil from your garden And coffee from your kitchen Look closely That I do As I watch your head turn away Your presence fade away And my blue eyes and brown hair Remain

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Date: 5/28/2024 5:18:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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