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05/23/24 'PICK-A-TITLE VOL44 Edward Ibeh

Look Closely

Look Closely

Black silk top hat
Upon greasy hair sat

White gloved, quick hands
Graceful gestures, gestures grand

Speaks nonsense but mostly, 
"Watch me now,  look closely!"

Sly smile, glint in eye
"You sucker", they imply

Swift movements over here
Draw my eyes, my gaze steer

Magic moving fast and ghostly
He continues to croon, "look closely"

The ears hear but not the eyes
"Look closely", magic lies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bartley Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Nice poem. Looks like we're old timers now. No more Best New Poets status. Ha!
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May 25, 2024 at 3:19 PM
You were Best New Poet for a week before I took the #1 spot for a while. Now we are just regular poets in the community. Hope you are able to become a premium member one day. Though, as you know, it is free to browse and post!
Woods Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Oh? I didn't realize I had status lol! Thanks for commenting Benjamin!
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