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05/23/24 'PICK-A-TITLE VOL44 Edward Ibeh
Look Closely Black silk top hat Upon greasy hair sat White gloved, quick hands Graceful gestures, gestures grand Speaks nonsense but mostly, "Watch me now, look closely!" Sly smile, glint in eye "You sucker", they imply Swift movements over here Draw my eyes, my gaze steer Magic moving fast and ghostly He continues to croon, "look closely" The ears hear but not the eyes "Look closely", magic lies.

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Date: 5/23/2024 12:16:00 PM
Nice poem. Looks like we're old timers now. No more Best New Poets status. Ha!
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/25/2024 3:19:00 PM
You were Best New Poet for a week before I took the #1 spot for a while. Now we are just regular poets in the community. Hope you are able to become a premium member one day. Though, as you know, it is free to browse and post!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/23/2024 12:44:00 PM
Oh? I didn't realize I had status lol! Thanks for commenting Benjamin!

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