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Look At You Haven'T You Done Well

Look at you haven't you done well With your custom built library office which smells if rich mahogany and many leather bound book's Isn't it amazing what money can buy An entire room of book's for the ignorant and illiterate A country mansion and more cars than garages and bespoke suits and watches than day's in the week With a trophy wife in check to adorn his arm And blessed with everything he ever dreamed of He still remained unfulfilled As all the money in the world could not buy the 1 thing he craved left remaining None of which he owned was earned His wealth his house his car's his freinds his wife At the end of the day it was all inherited And therefore worthless

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Date: 7/9/2020 7:00:00 PM
Ta always and cheers my mate You have strengthened my resolve to keep on writting at all and to strive to write better. So thank you David much obliged and appreciative as ever
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Date: 7/9/2020 2:22:00 PM
A very good point here Christopher but personally I would never feel it was worthless if given to a worthy person, I know your talking about mega wealth bragging rights and your right they would love to say they made their own fortune, but never can and it cheapens their status, boy you stretch my imagination cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/9/2020 7:11:00 PM
Wrote a poem called No i am Spartacus Check it out if you will please Bud It's my attempt at humour i don't know why but for some strange reason it tickled me and i kind of like it
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/9/2020 7:02:00 PM
Replied to myself sorry Bud. My reply above is to you

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