Look At the Pastry Sissy

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Oct. 14, 2023   10,26 pm

Those bread rolls look so yummy,
Can you buy me some sissy?

You mean those brioche buns?
So sweet for you, my little one.

But candies are much sweeter,
May I have one my dear sister?

Timmy, I don’t have enough dime,
Can we buy one next time?

But sissy, I’m starving now,
Can we go and sell our cow?

Selling our cow is a big regret,
If we do, we don’t have any more pet.

Oh sis, I’ve this brilliant idea,
Let’s go back home and ask mama.

Smart boy, let’s go home then,
You better walk and hold my hand.

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Date: 10/23/2023 7:04:00 AM
Get into the conversation Contest Judged: 10/20/2023 6:54:00 PM Sponsored by: Eve Roper Place 1 (up to 4th multi-w)
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:28:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:03:00 AM
Thank you so much again my dear poet friend Paula especially your warm congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/21/2023 8:21:00 AM
Lovely poem Len.. Congratulations on your win,,
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:02:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet friend Silent for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/20/2023 10:59:00 PM
Len, a very heartfelt poem, I enjoyed reading. Thank you for taking part in the contest and congratulations on your win. God bless you
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/23/2023 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Eve. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. Thank you so much especially for the inspiration of your contest. God bless you always and your writing. Hugs
Date: 10/15/2023 6:36:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Leonora ... I think this is for Eve's contest ... without a photo, I see this photo ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2023 4:52:00 PM
Yes, it is my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words and best wishes. Best wishes to you always too. God bless you always and your writings.
Date: 10/14/2023 2:23:00 PM
A very creative/cute~write/story. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed weekend..........
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2023 4:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet friend Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem of mine. May God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs
Date: 10/14/2023 2:15:00 PM
What a precious poem about brother and sister on a day out together. It was pleasant to read your poetry today, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2023 4:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Bill. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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