Len Gasun Poet Couplet

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Oct. 14, 2023   10,26 pm

Look At the Pastry Sissy

Those bread rolls look so yummy,
Can you buy me some sissy?

You mean those brioche buns?
So sweet for you, my little one.

But candies are much sweeter,
May I have one my dear sister?

Timmy, I don’t have enough dime,
Can we buy one next time?

But sissy, I’m starving now,
Can we go and sell our cow?

Selling our cow is a big regret,
If we do, we don’t have any more pet.

Oh sis, I’ve this brilliant idea,
Let’s go back home and ask mama.

Smart boy, let’s go home then,
You better walk and hold my hand.

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Len Gasun October 23, 2023 at 7:04 AM Get into the conversation Contest Judged: 10/20/2023 6:54:00 PM Sponsored by: Eve Roper Place 1 (up to 4th multi-w)

Paula Goldsmith October 22, 2023 at 10:28 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a blessed day writing away.......... Len Gasun October 23, 2023 at 7:03 AM Thank you so much again my dear poet friend Paula especially your warm congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Silent One October 21, 2023 at 8:21 AM Lovely poem Len.. Congratulations on your win,, Len Gasun October 23, 2023 at 7:02 AM Thank you so much my dear poet friend Silent for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Eve Roper October 20, 2023 at 10:59 PM Len, a very heartfelt poem, I enjoyed reading. Thank you for taking part in the contest and congratulations on your win. God bless you Len Gasun October 23, 2023 at 7:01 AM Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Eve. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. Thank you so much especially for the inspiration of your contest. God bless you always and your writing. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2023 at 6:36 AM - A lovely poem, Leonora ... I think this is for Eve's contest ... without a photo, I see this photo ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Len Gasun October 18, 2023 at 4:52 PM Yes, it is my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words and best wishes. Best wishes to you always too. God bless you always and your writings.

Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2023 at 2:23 PM A very creative/cute~write/story. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed weekend.......... Len Gasun October 18, 2023 at 4:50 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet friend Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem of mine. May God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Bill Baker October 14, 2023 at 2:15 PM What a precious poem about brother and sister on a day out together. It was pleasant to read your poetry today, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Len Gasun October 18, 2023 at 4:49 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Bill. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs